幸福就是积极的情感体验,自我价值感与意义的实现,以及良好的人际关系!
一、 多种视角表达幸福
英语作文中, 对幸福的诠释并非单一。 我们可以从不同角度入手:
1 物质富足的幸福:
例如,拥有一幢舒适的房子,一辆好车, 丰富的资源等。 "Happiness, for some, means material wealth; a comfortable home, a reliable car, and enough resources for peace of mind." 但这只能带来短期快乐, 不是长久幸福的要素!
2 人际关系和谐的幸福:
拥有亲密的朋友和家庭。和睦的家人是你坚实的后盾, 真挚的朋友分享你的快乐悲苦。“Happiness lies in meaningful relationships;close friendships build a strong support system. To truly share happiness, someone should share experiences. That being said,"Having strong friendships helps people feel happier because individuals have a more secure base” explains the emotional impact which strong familial bonds and friends have on individuals' contentment with oneself and with their present circumstances"(心理学支持下)
3 自我实现的幸福
实现个人理想和目标, 做自己热爱的事。比如热中于志愿者帮忙社会。 "Finding happiness often comes after meeting self–imposed hurdles along the way to becoming oneself" this quotation demonstrates how overcoming struggles and barriers to a person’s self improves the very person involved.” 或者,完成梦想中的马拉松比赛“achieving my goals is paramount to happiness for I feel stronger because they make up my progress in time.” 成功后的成就感, 自信带来的喜悦构筑了最持久稳固的快乐感受。“Working through hardship towards achievement in one's hobby produces significant psychological development toward stability and satisfaction. That growth ultimately proves one’s capability. This also applies whenever new knowledge acquired or whenever difficult struggles fought to be over and done finally. With practice or effort alone would one be empowered toward self-realization,”
二、 提升作文高级感的技巧
- 活用高级词汇: 用 "contentment" 代替 "happiness", 用 ” fulfillment “ 代替" achieving goals" , 用 "well-being" 代替 "health".
- 运用复杂句式: 尝试运用从句,例如定语从句、名词性从句等,使句子结构更 complex 。(为了更符合题目规范减少复杂内容,请根据自身情况增设,此处只为讲解而存在,注意合理增减)
- 加入个人感悟: 真正打动读者的,是你的独特感悟。 写出你对幸福的个性化理解,而非泛泛而谈.
三、常见的疑问解答
Q: 如何构思一篇关于幸福的作文?
A: 明确写作的角度十分重要。“从个体、社群抑或寰宇入手亦可”首先选择你是描述什么是构成幸福?幸福观是随着人经历及想法的变化发展改变的还是永远的定义?,接下来,围绕选择的主题收集例子或事实、并从自己的生活阅历去写作. 确保观点逻辑连贯,条理清晰.
Q: 如何避免作文内容空洞?
A: 用具体的细节和例子支撑你的观点。"幸福不仅仅是肤浅的心情。他蕴涵的深远与长久,才能更好的体会人间之美事" 避免空泛的陈述式语句. 你经历的,感到开心的,那些才能最真挚的表现一个人的内心!
Q: 如何提高英语写作水平? 你要知道你的观点是否成立?证据与理由支撑程度怎样?语法规范正确吗?表达地明白流利吗?写作要有良好的思维逻辑流程(举例说明可加入细节的叙述/具体说明与描写),以及组织结构清晰,结构分明完整流畅;才能为取得理想成绩奠步根本。你最好是能有明确的思考去写作,以使得行文连贯有逻辑
A: 多阅读、多写作,并结合练习进行。 学习地道表达,积累词汇.寻求他人反馈改进. 多看英文杂志报纸也提升英语作文阅 读能力 ,积累常用句型 。 当然,掌握语法与阅读水平是基础!